Lyin’ Doc 124

Lyin’ Doc 124

Alien Guitarded Quack

And that’s the truth

or maybe not...

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2014-01-27

9 Not a Chance

1 The creator leaves no chance

5 All to ego do enhance

1 Planning that creation fail

1 That all may repairs hail

5 The child who sick does die

5 No need to inquire why

1 Slaughter of innocents

1 To creator’s will bent

2 Cruel acts to man by man

5 The essence of the plan

1 A feature not a bug

2 That you misery hug

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2 comments:

  1. I wrote this in about 15 minutes whilst attending a LIONS District event.

    I wrote the twelve lines and could not continue because the poem was finished.

    Casting about for a chord structure, I looked at a standard blues progression as noted at the bottom of the poem. I discovered that the poem length and the blues progression structure meshed perfectly,

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  2. presented for the first time during open mic at Vincent Hill Saloon in Acton CA 2014.01.26 Sunday afternoon

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